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Rhyming takes time. You did well here.

And yes, we may have made a mess of our lives like those Peter preached to in Acts 2. But when they believed that Jesus, the one they had crucified, was both LORD and Christ and obeyed Peter by yielding themselves and were baptized for the forgiveness of their sins, they received the gift of the Holy Spirit and were made new in the sight of God since they had no sin between them and God.

Nice work, keep writing.
Thought provoking. An enjoyable read.
An enjoyable poem.
Your words flowed from your heart, remember that is what it is all about...
This is a lovely poem. I liked the journey you took me on and the message in your words.
During the break in the Weekly Challenge schedule, Id like to invite you to the FaithWriters forums, where Im holding a weekly free class in various writing strategies. Participation is strictly voluntary, but I give free and timely feedback on all contributions. Id love to have you drop by!