The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/13
Lovely messages throughout your devotional. Nicely done.

God bless~
Thank You. God bless you
This entry has served to remind me that I forgot to pray about a conflict in my life today. Thank you.
This is a lovely mini sermon. You make some wonderful points.

I noticed some lines had words missing. That's why it's so important to have a proofreaders. Our minds will fill in those words. The other thing I might encourage you to consider is the number of times you used the word storm. You can avoid that by combining sentences and using synonyms. Ex: There are times when life's upheavals rain down on us.

I think your message is one we all need reminding of from time to time. One of my favorite quotes is Sometimes God calms the storm, other times God let's the storm rage while he calms his child. Nice job.
09/08/13
I loved the subject choice and how you dealt with our decision to let God be our help and our guide. I noticed a few glitches as the wrong words were used. Keep writing and that will smooth out. It was great overall.