The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/13
Powerful testimonial writing. Learn to paragraph for the challenge and tightly edit and you have a doable piece.
05/07/13
Wow! - so descriptive! It helps the reader if you leave an extra line between paragrahs. (I made that mistake when I was a beginner, too.) Good writing!
This is a powerful testimony. I could feel the anguish of the MC and know the fear of rejection and the ecstasy of realizing Jesus will never abandon me. With a bit of polishing, I think this would be a perfect fit for the Testimony contest. You did a great job.
Congratulations on placing 8 in your level! (The top 15 rankings in level one are posted on the message boards)