The Official Writing Challenge
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Tabatha might have learned about art, what she discovered was reality. Well done. God bless you.
05/06/13
Interesting! It has a touch of mystery and allegory within it.
Well done.
Nice. You continued to build intrigue, keeping my attention and wrapped it up with a satisfying ending. A little tighter writing, eliminating unnecessary words, would make it even more enjoyable. Well done.
05/07/13
Very well written. I enjoy it very much. Good entry for the contest. God Bless! LaVonne
Oh this is a wonderful story. Even though I may not be able to appreciate Pollock, I know the majesty of a stunning sunset. Once on my birthday, my daughter and I talked about how the sunset was God's birthday present to me. A few months later she gasped and said "Look Mommy, it must be someone's birthday!" Now whenever we see a sunset we say It must be someone's birthday. Thank you for bringing that to life for me so vividly. Congratulations on ranking 6th in level one. (The highest rankings are posted on the message boards)