The Official Writing Challenge
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I feel empathy for the "son" in this poem who, so wants to be loved and to have a Heavenly Father who will love him. If you are writing about your own experience, I pray that you will experience the depths of God's love for you.
02/10/05
This poem is a heartfelt cry that God knows and understands. Your tattoos and scars will always remind you, not only of where you came from, but also of the wonderful grace of Jesus.
02/10/05
I suggest you write "Jesus is the One" rather than "was".