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By Shontae Johnson
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The all caps and no punctuation other than periods distracted me a bit. I also think if you had shared some of your own experiences where God led you to a new door might have helped the reader relate more, but I understand that not everyone is ready to share such intimate details with strangers.
I liked your take on the topic. I thought it was quite creative and it wasn't anything that I had thought of while mulling over an idea for this week. You also make the reader stop and think, which is always a good thing. Keep writing. I sense a deep passion in your words.
God bless