The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the advice of dancing to your own beat. If someone is different they are labeled weird but your poem encourages people to be who God made them to be.
05/26/11
Nice! Thanks for sharing.
05/28/11
I liked the overall feeling and rhythm of the poem. I am not sure the first line of the second verse quite fit.

I think in all our busyness we forget to take time just to enjoy the moment. Thank you for uplifting my spirit.
Thank you I needed that today! It truly is amazing how powerful words can be. Your words lifted my spirits. Thank you!
06/01/11
i like the rhythm and i like the words great one :-)