The Official Writing Challenge
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This would work for next weeks challenge of "taste" as well. :)

This poem has a great message and although it is short, is packed full of meaning. I especially like these lines! Cast down any imagination, argument or thought
That threatens your freedom, which Jesus has bought
Good poem, almost hymn like. Lots of excellent imagery.
Ahh God's amazing wonderful grace. Well done.Blessings, Ruth
Very well done...
Great poem and message.
This is a beautiful poem that speaks the truth quite nicely.

At times I had a hard time understanding some lines, I think if you added punctuation that would help a lot.

Your passion and love for the Lord shines through in your words. Congratulations in placing in the top 15 of your level.