The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, my, you kept me in suspense throughout! Excellent job! I especially thought the description of Molly mentally pushing her heart back into her chest was effective.
What a description of a servant's heart! Well done!
Very strange and full of suspense.
Fascinating, and compelling!
Oooh shivers. I like shivers LOL Great piece with a lovely ending. Thanks for sharing!
Kept me reading till the end.
I'm not clear on why the Holy Spirit would send cards that so obviously terrified Mary. But you captured the moodiness of this piece very well.
Very good.. Kept me glud to it through out.. and a great finish.. Was wondering about it as the child was their for the blanket... cool touch.
Larry, this was a very good take on the "postcards" topic. I did guess who the postcards were from quite early, but I think I'm tuned in for that sort of thing now. Even so, it was very good and I loved the ending - it really brought it home. I want you to be encouraged, as you actually did quite well with the Level 1 Judges' ratings that week. Keep rising to the Challenge and I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of your work in the future. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)