The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 738 times
Member Comments
Precious poem of a timely subject. If you devide into stanzas, it makes it easier for the reader. Other then that, it is well written with much love. Something I enjoy seeing in a poem. "Nicely Done" "God Bless You"
I agree that you should separate your stanzas, but a very timely poem. Good job.
Timely subject treatment in this lovely poem. I like the rhythm too.
Much heart and feeling went into this piece. Keep writing from your heart.
Such brave young men and women choose to fight a war not-their-own. Loved this piece. Thanks for sharing!
Very rich in feeling and meaning, excellent rhyme. Work on more consistent meter (the same number of accented and unaccented syllables in each line).
I purely just loved it. Beautifully written. Finding a way to represent many moms and dads who are longing to hear a word from their children..well--I think this poem portrays the story in a very heartfelt manner. Nice job! God bless ya, littlelight