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11/29/09
You've written about many aspects of orange. I like your "eternal flame" in us concept. Much to think about with that! Thanks!
Love the idea behind this!
12/01/09
Yes we have a great God, giving us all these wonderful colours (English spelling). Thank you for sharing this thoughtful piece. Colin
12/01/09
Nice work. You definitely captured the topic and finished with a great message. I had to read through it a couple of times to get a handle on the flow of the article, and kept coming back to the word "Carrots.", which, for me, may have been an unintended centerpiece to the story. Definitely came away with a profound sense of orange! Good work, keep writing!
12/02/09
Well-written, and very orange-y!

You might consider something with more focus, or perhaps with a more personal touch next time.

Your writing has tons of potential!
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