The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/09
This was an absolute delight to read. You have excellent imagery in this piece, the rhythm seems almost flawless and it flows very well. Very nicely done!
07/31/09
Well done...I really liked the way this poem flowed. The imagery and the rhythm were impecable. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
08/04/09
OOOOh, I like this. Excellent job. :)
08/04/09
lovley humorous descripive and well crafted. I love the harvey davisons reving, the hay fever and so many spring ideas mixed together to create a rich perfume of sounds and flavours.
The last to lines of the third verse dont work for me. Being picky as everything else is good.