The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/09
You have some great thoughts here on the heart. I have experienced most of these myself. Don't be afraid to expand and utilize your word limit to develop these thoughts as much as possible. Good job
06/16/09
I liked your descriptions of your heart, and can certainly relate.

Consider shortening up a few sentences into individual thoughts instead of just using commas. :)

Great job! So glad you submitted this entry.