The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good. this gave me goosebumps. Keep up the good work.
Wow. This is amazing. The fifth verse, it really captures I think what the Prodigal Son must have really, really felt like. Good emotion and stark contrast to the reality when it sinks in.
Thanks for sharing!
A good idea for the subject/ some intersting phrases the armpit bit is good but the "suffing my trashes" I have no Idea what that phrase means.