The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this prayer and subject matter good. In the first section you use the word "others" quite a few times. Repititon can be useful in a poem to make a point but I think the poem could be improved by using different words that mean the same thing i.e folks friends people etc.
Wow..wonderful thoughts! This should the prayer of all of us. Well done!