The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/05
I loved the ending!
08/01/05
That was very cool. I loved the analogy. God bless ya, littlelight
08/02/05
AMEN!
08/03/05
A creative take on the topic -I liked the use of the armor :)
I liked the picture that you wrote, it was vivid.
A lovely and imaginative piece of work. Keep writing!
08/07/05
Cleverly done.
I could almost hear the clink of metal on that conveyor belt! Good job!
09/24/06
Fantastic! Just super! And it doesn't have to take 750 words to convey the message either! Short, sweet and to the point. So talented!!! I wish I could ...oh, oh..."Thou Shalt not Covet!!" but you get the picture! Loved it!