The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
I enjoyed the nostalgic aspects of this essay.

Watch out for run-on sentences, and consider paragraphing for a smoother read.

Keep writing--I enjoyed this!
01/16/09
Your story reminds me of how special small-town life in the 50's and 60's really was! We can all try to be that "good neighbor," though no matter where and when we live!