The Official Writing Challenge
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08/21/08
Good job. I like the description. Even though it didn't rhyme it transitioned well. Keep Writing.
This reads like a song! I love the second verse and the last one! It's just right, makes me want to hum this, it's so hopeful. Nice job. ^_^
Beautiful thoughts and some of the stanzas reminded me of a prayer. Loved it!
08/23/08
I like the flow of this poem. Excellent choice of words.
08/23/08
This has a very musical feel to it...quite lovely to read.
08/26/08
It reminds me of many of David's Psalms starting with confusion and pain then groping for the light followed by conviction that God will redeem his life and rescue him. Then finally that question: will you really be there for me? Aren't we all so wimbly and vascillate. Thank God He is the Rock of Truth that becomes our sure anchor. Good work!