The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, yes... so many of us try to hide from our sin, don't we. Thank you for writing this.
Great take on the subject! That was wonderful. I loved everything about it. Thank you.
Oh, this was so good! You really caught was it is to be a child and to have childish thinking. I enjoyed it!
Very nice. Loved the dialogue - it was completely believable.

May God bless and keep you writing such wonderful work.

Dan Blankenship

Excellent writing on topic and congratulations on your win!
Brought back memories of my own childhood and hiding from my punishment. Only I would have gotten double whippings - once for the cookie and one for hiding. Great job on expressing a child's fear and emotions. Congrats on your 2nd place! Move on up to level 2. :) Cat
Nice writing all around. I especially enjoyed returning to my own childhood woes. You also showed how we all no matter the age try to hide from our sins. Congratulations on your win.
I absolutely loved this one...congratulations.