The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/08
Great job. You correlated the two fathers well. Your point was well made. Thank you for a good read.
08/10/08
This is an interesting analogy. You 'painted' a vivid picture at the beginning. I was a bit confused as to who the strangers were, but I'm glad you explained about the father.
Well done.
Excellent entry! Very well written and an enjoyable read.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Excellent entry! Very well written and an enjoyable read.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Oops.


I have no idea why that went on twice.

Sorry!