The Official Writing Challenge
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Good writing. The story is told nicely and flows well. One can picture the scenes you describe as if you're there.
06/18/05
Good images, thank you for sharing this article.
06/18/05
Very nicely told - almost felt like your younger self was telling it. It's good that you're able to have many more years with your father.
06/19/05
I can appreciate your being thankful that on that day your birthday no less, you did not lose your father. I agree it sounded more like you were telling it now through your six year old eyes. The first couple of sentences in the last paragraph were confusing, need to reword those, but a good story.