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Topic: Cousin(s) (05/22/08)
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TITLE: Cousin So and So | Previous Challenge Entry
By Deborah Moricle
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You look like my cousin, So and So.
Since when does your hair, look like a crow?
And why has your teeth, turned so yellow?
Last time I saw you, you were all aglow.
Not to mention, that really big ego.
Where are all those ducks, you had in a row?
Oh yea, and how about those big bucks, you liked to show?
Seems like you have reached, an all time low.
Once you were a ten, but now you're a zero.
It looks like you may have acquired, a little more cargo.
Parts that were petite, have now become jumbo.
I believe your fruit has gotten, just a little too mellow.
Muscles you once had, now resemble jell-o.
For the life of me, I can no longer see your halo.
Wish I had my camera, this would be the perfect photo.
Fate has seemed to deal you, a really hard blow.
Just goes to show, you never really know.
Now, this may sound like, a lot of stones to throw.
But you have to remember, I knew you years ago.
I'm glad to say, in your footsteps I didn't follow.
Cause all of my kin, seem to be loco!
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Well done. The rhythm was a bit rough, but you kept me chuckling the whole way through.
Keep writing.