The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/08
Creative POV (point of view). I like the brother's version of familiar stories. The ending seemed a bit rushed. You had enough "time" or left over words to develop Joshua's conversion.
Well done. Keep writing
Good selection for the topic, we often think of John the Baptist as Jesus' cousin but fail to remember the rest of His extended family. Nice job. :)