The Official Writing Challenge
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Ooohh...I didn't expect the hint of mystery at the end! Very engrossing story, and I was quite caught up in what I thought was a tale about a nice, friendly couple; good job pulling off that last little twist so completely.
I like this it seems we don't always know do we.
Unique take on this topic. Well planned to give so much personal detail about the couple and family, then to leave the reader wondering. :)