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04/10/08
This is a very inspiring entry! It would really help if you would double space between your paragraphs. These old eyes need all the help they can get! I am so glad that the granddaughter came to Christ before her grandfather died. Thank you for sharing!
Laury
04/10/08
Nice POV--I appreciated that even thought the grandpa's body was dying, his spirit still shone.

There are a few spelling errors and sentence fragments to edit, and it might be easier on your readers if you hit an extra "enter" between paragraphs.

Lovely ending.
04/10/08
With a granddaughter arriving any day now, I really related to this story. The ending was great, what a blessed time meeting your Savior and finding out He answered your constant prayer.

Walk
A very emotional story with a good ending. I appreciated the grandpa's dedication to praying for his granddaughter's salvation.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.