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04/11/08
A very nice story of your relationship with your grandfather. I loved the way you described your shared emotions.
This could be used a good devotional piece. I appreciate that you and your grandfather could share those feelings and emotions together. What a beautiful relationship.

God will take our tears and use them for his glory. No trial that we face is in vain.

Thank you for sharing this. It blessed me.
04/11/08
I liked the feeling of authenticity in this piece. The paragraphs, and entire piece, were a bit short, and there wasn’t really enough time to get to know the grandparents, but the narrator’s emotions come across very well.
04/12/08
Aww, this is a touching story and one that I can relate to. It's hard to say goodbye to our loved ones, and the older we get, the more goodbyes seem to come to us. I love the hope of Heaven that you point to in the end-that is one of the most precious gifts God gave us!