The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/08
This is a very nice teen devotional. Keep on writing!
Laury
Very nice story. Great ending.
02/16/08
Great story - keep up the good writing! God bless :)
02/17/08
Good story and well written. I don't think the life lesson at the end is necessary, in my opinion. Let your story stand on its own. Keep writing.
Good job, on topic, nice writing. :)