The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/08
This was a very good story. I felt like I should have gotten up to help her find her wallet:) Keep on writing!
Laury
02/16/08
I liked this story - God's ways are awesome through all His miracles! Keep on writing! God bless :)
02/17/08
You told the story well. Watch your paragraph spacing, especially when people are speaking. Keep writing.
Good story. Dialogue very realistic. Nice job. :)
A good example of God answering prayer.
I'm glad her husband was proven wrong. :)