The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
Yes, procrastination will get you every time.
Breaking this into paragraphs would make this easier to read.
Keep writing...and keep teaching!
Good story - when you get past the intro!
01/11/08
I read this two days ago, but I've been putting off commenting on it....oh, ha ha ha.

Sorry about that, I couldn't resist. Cute story, and good examples. Be careful with the slip into 2nd person in an early sentence.
A good take on procrastination. How true. So many times we think we'll get away with putting it off. We are accountable to the Lord.
Keep writing.
01/20/08
I liked your story as well, use a few more paragraphs in the body, easier for reading.
Good story on procrastination and keep wriring.