The Official Writing Challenge
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12/14/07
A good look at the early church.

The all-caps words are mildly distracting; they make a reader feel shouted at. Consider using italics instead, or better still, you own strong word choices can convey your meaning.

Your passion is evident--keep writing.
12/15/07
I like how you started with a verse. You had some good examples of the early Church. Watch your spelling. "chosen" and "Evangelist".
I think you tried to fit too much into this. There's a lot of good thoughts, but not enough room to explain them all.
You make alot of good strong points in this entry. It is obvious you have alot of zeal in your writing. I agree that a challenge buddy for punctuation and grammer would benefit you. It will help you to polish your skills. Keep on writing, your doing a great job!
Oh to walk with the people you mentioned that displayed to the lost world around them so well the love of the Lord. You have so much here that speaks the truth of the Lord's intention for His church.