The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful last stanza- the real truth- the teacher leaves there taught. Nice.
11/01/07
This is precious!

A few capitalization issues ("Bible", for example, and a few more)--but that may be poetic license.

Love the rhyme, the meter, the great imagery--this is a wonderful poem.
11/06/07
I love it, and those last two lines are super. Good work.
11/09/07
Congratulations on your second place award! Your poem really captured the essence of childhood Sunday School. Great writing :)