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10/19/07
The problems you mentioned do exist in our culture for sure. I like this point: "We must grow smaller." True for the church, and true for the individual. Like it.
10/20/07
What a wonderful concept! You've really expressed an important message in this little essay. Bravo!

I'm not familiar with the word "lojack", and when I looked it up online, I still couldn't figure out what it meant here. Did you mean a different word, or (more likely) am I hopelessly out of touch?

This is a really good entry.
Funny-I was stumped on the same word! Anyways, loved this piece. I mirror your thoughts! It's like pastor said Sunday "Don't let the worship team worship for you, become part of the service and put forth your portion." I really agree with the small group theory. Our church does not have thousands in attendance but we all seem to have our small groups which gather. Certain people we go to in times of need and I think this is an awesome way to move in the Christian church. Back to you--wonderfully written essay--easy read and well said. Be Blessed!
Was just browsing through the entries and the last paragraph with the 3AM people caught my eye. What a true message. I think we all really need to hear this and to stay connected-for real. Thanks for sharing! ^_^ Good writing!
10/24/07
A very good essay. I like the simple but eloquent way that you express your opinion. Very nicely done!
Congrats on your highly commended! ^_^