The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/07
Perfect title! Your opening story really got my attention. I loved your example of the coals staying hot together and then taking one out and it goes cold. Your ending verse is very good.
10/15/07
I liked your approach of comparing corporate worship to a birthday celebration. Even the 'doctor's report' reminded me of the joy we experience when a word from the Pastor's message restores hope and wholeness to our beings. Thank you for a pleasant read.