The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
What a great testimony of God's love.

This is a great start. I didn't quite connect with the mc, but would have liked to. Pull me in, make me feel her pain, don't let me just observe. I want to know her anguish. I want to cry with her. I want to want to reach out and hug her.

Good job & keep writing.

09/02/07
Thank you for this reminder that we are not forsaken. Touching entry!