The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
This is good. I like the ideas presented here.

This felt a bit unfinished. I felt like you could have expanded on both parts quite a bit to draw the reader in.

Great job overall. Keep writing!
08/31/07
Well done. I would not like to be in such a situation. Indeed God does sometimes seem unwilling to help us not to be fearful in certain difficult situations, but when you look from a different perspective, the blessings always outnumber the problems.
09/04/07
This is a short piece with a big message! In a few words you gave me a lot to think about! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us! :)