The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/07
Praise God. That really spoke to my heart. Well written.
08/31/07
the "warm cloak of fearfulness" that was very descriptive and also very familiar too me. I like how it is so encouraging to take those small steps forward.
09/02/07
This devotional is very nice.

You may want to have a stronger opening and make some of your sentences shorter.

This is a great start. Good job.
Are you talkin' to me or what?! This was so me before I decided to do something with my gifts! Great devotional and spoken with the authority you possess through Jesus. Keep writing--it's blessed!