The Official Writing Challenge
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This started off very well. I liked the setting and you did a good job with Bill's character. The ending was a tad bit...flat-for me. I guess I was expecting something a little more dramatic-lol. But good job! ^_^
07/30/07
Great job describing your main character and his, er...character! I enjoyed reading this!