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06/10/07
A sweet story. This trip between father and son is something that any child would treasure.
Little boys learn from their fathers. What a good article on following in father's footsteps. We could all learn to follow in God's footsteps.
06/12/07
A good story about a father and his son. I think children would enjoy reading this!
06/13/07
Good story, children often look up to their parents and want to be just like them.
06/13/07
I pictured the father and son the whole way. :)

Keep in mind that double-spacing between paragraphs makes things a lot easier to read on challenge articles. ;)

Great job!
07/14/07
I really enjoyed this article. How the dad lead his son the whole way to the water fall. Even when the son fell his dad was there to pick him up. I really liked the article. As I was ready this I also thought how God picks up when we fall. Keep up the good work.