The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very good. The meter is off a little and "lightening" should be "lightning". But this really touches the emotions. It is a beautiful piece.
Good description, great message. I love the footnote, too. It adds a lot. Well done.
05/25/07
A great reminder to rest in God's hands in times of trouble. I enjoyed reading it.
05/25/07
Love the comparison to real life. Very easy to read. Flowed smoothly
05/25/07
Love the comparison to real life. Very easy to read. Flowed smoothly
05/26/07
Lovely, and quite visual. Moving!
05/28/07
Amen! great message and very descriptive poetry
Great message, very visual. I enjoyed this quite a lot.
05/30/07
Marvelous imagery! One of my favorites!
Good poem, well-written and smoothly rhymed. Keep up the good work!
05/30/07
Very visual, great comparisions. Thanks for sharing.
05/30/07
Great imagery and a great lesson. I liked this!