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05/25/07
This is really awesome. I like how you incorprated the Armor of God into this.
05/25/07
I like your descriptions of spiritual battle. It's an encouraging way to look at life's troubles; when all seems lost, God steps in to help us. I enjoyed reading your poem and I needed to be reminded today of His faithfulness.
Thank you, this was wonderful, what a descriptive depiction.
I liked this very much...strong and purely scriptural truths...great rythm and rhyme as well! Pat
05/25/07
To me, a good poem is one I can connect to emotionally, and this one did exactly that.
05/26/07
We may feel we have lost but never with God on our side - great stuff> My sort of poem.
05/27/07
I truly enjoyed reading this, well done!
05/28/07
Very good! I felt like I was watching the battle and was glad for your great description of how God "outfits" us.
wonderful poem of overcoming the enemy with God's strength.
This is very good. You show us that though life is a battle there is an answer.

Keep writing, your work shows a lot of promise.