The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a cute mystery, but somehow I missed the solution. Was it Arthur? the writing here is good. Keep it up.
Great detail, but I also didn't figure out the solution. Keep writing!
Sorry, but you stumped me too. The writing is very good, so I hope to read more from you.
Spooky! I liked the descriptions and sudden bursts of suspense. I could smell the stale fries and see the different wallpaper patterns. Good job. ^_^