The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful and very descriptive! I especially loved your wording in the stanza about the sunrise. Nice work.
02/24/07
This is writing I would expect to see in a much higher group. Very strong imagery, and the sense of climbing as one progresses through the poem - truly a song of ascents! Also, I'm jealous that you've climbed Kilimanjaro! An excellent poem, which I would not be at all surprised to see in winners' row.
02/26/07
This is so descriptive and very well done. Each word was well chosen and your overall result was excellent. A very good job
03/01/07
Thank you for sharing with us your wonderful walk with him. He, in you, shines through with your wonderful words.
03/01/07
Just beautiful - amazing, wonderful! SO deserving of your EC placing! Congrats!
03/01/07
Yeah! - told you so. Congratulations.
03/02/07
I was also one of the judges for your piece and I was most impressed with the quality of your work. I knoew you were not destined to sit in the Beginner's level for long!

Congratulations on a well deserved Editor's Choice win!
04/01/07
I just read your award-winning poem (sports/fitness) and was awestruck by the beauty of your writing. It's not what I expected to find on the beginner level. Keep submitting these poems. You have a great talent.