The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/07
I loved this! Moving, well written, I could picture it all. Strong, strong descriptions. My only thought is a more active title to reflect the energy of the piece. Wow all the same.
01/30/07
An amazing poem! These images are so powerfully written. It definitely blew me away. Keep writing!