The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/07
Chilling, but well written. You definitely set a stage here and you have a way with storytelling. Keep writing!
01/28/07
Nicely written! Chilling is a good word.
01/30/07
Very unsettling so it probably hits us all on a personal level. Could be fleshed out into a longer piece, but then letting the reader personalize the story is a great convention. I'll be thinking about this for a while. Thanks and keep writing!