The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice SHORT entry. :o) I liked it and wished that you had expanded on the nurse and doctor's prior relationship a little more. I definitely wanted to know more about them. I will say I was a little let down by the nurse's note. Of course I wanted it to be a note that would result in the doctor's spiritual conversion (don't we all like "happy endings"), but it's possible one or both of them was already a Christian (??), so some of those unanswered questions left me a little unsettled, but I still liked what you DID write. :o) Kudos to you!
This was pretty nice. I also wish it could have been expanded some to show the relations between characters. But good job!