The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/06
I enjoyed reading this poem! I love the way you weave into it the villagers' special way of greeting newcomers ("fat" being intended as a compliment). This lends color and originality to the missionary girl's experience. Also enjoy the description of her white skin and golden hair as being strange and interesting from the perspective of the culture she's reaching.
10/28/06
This is a very nice poem, and I enjoyed reading it very much. It illustrates the concept of inner beauty and how God sees our heart rather than our frame. Well done!
I thought this was really well done in terms of the message. The girl may be a fictional character in a poem, but her mission and ministry seem very real. I felt the Spirit through this piece.
I could visualize the country, the people, the missionary throughout the entire poem! You painted a good,clear picture with your words! Great job.
Got a soft spot for poetry, I'm a lover of rhyme.

You inspired me truly with your poesy sublime.

You captured the beauty of the missionary girl.

Who labored for love in this beautiful world.

Both her hair and her heart of purest gold

Were descriptively versed in this tale that you told.

A job well done my partner in rhyme

May you be a blessing for a very long time.
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When your poetry inspires poetry you KNOW you’ve done a good job!

Thank you for sharing your gift.
Loved the title! This was great! One or two lines were slightly awkward for me, but everything else flowed so smoothly-great job!
11/01/06
I enjoyed it, too, and was blessed by the message!