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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Garden (09/07/06)
Life unfolds
Reds march
Seeds sprout
Water drips
Fly’s fly
Bees buzz
Butterflies are
God is
In the Garden.

Swimming in the sea of love that is God, I feel the strong undercurrent of doubt that is my human existence; kicking it away I dive deeper in search of the garden.

In the garden we walk.
Do you see?

In the garden we talk.
Do you hear?

In the garden we cry.
Do you feel?

In the garden we love.
Do you know the garden?

The center of all creation, home sweet home, the fertilizer of knowledge, the garden awaits your divine presence. Shed your fears and step into the garden of truth, the garden of light, allow yourself to flourish in the garden.

Trust God, step into the garden, take a deep breath and experience the truth of who you are. You are a child of god who belongs in the garden; accept your beauty, your light, your truth and bloom like the rest of God’s flowers, in the garden.
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Rhonda Clark
09/18/06
You have some interesting takes on God's love. My favorite is your analogy of us "swimming in God's love."

This poem read like two seperate poems instead of one and some of the thoughts didn't seem to flow.

Overall, you did great. Thanks for sharing. :)

Donna Powers
09/18/06
A charming invitation to experience God's grace. Good rhythm, and a nice flow. Very nicely done.
Sara Harricharan
09/19/06
Simply delightful! I love your writing style. The sentence of "Swimming in the sea of love that is God, I feel the strong undercurrent of doubt that is my human existence; kicking it away I dive deeper in search of the garden."
Was very vivid and hard to skip over without feeling inside for the words.
Great job!