The Official Writing Challenge
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09/18/06
I like your comparison of God's plan for our lives to a garden.

This piece needs to be jazzed up. It seems flat. Using more visual details would help.

You did a good job showing how God nurtures us.
09/18/06
Informative and a good comparison between our gardens and our souls. I think that putting this into paragraph form might help, but I definitely got your point and I thank you for sharing this.
Very informative article on gardens. Much information here.