The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
Wonderful essay! A great reminder to show others the source of the hope within us!
Very nice thoughts. You might be careful for typos. There are a few sentences that need work. The last sentence in the first paragraph for instance...
Try one more proofread before submitting. It's so easy to miss the little things. I think our brains know what we are saying and we fill in stuff that is not there. I have done this many times. Keep writing. We are all learning.