The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 491 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
12/02/16
Well done.
God bless~
12/04/16
I loved this poem. God's clouds have always puzzled me too.

I was just playing a trivia game and was surprised how much clouds weigh. I guess its all the water they hold.
There is nothing cloudy about your lovely imagery and excellent use of alliteration in this delightful poem.
This is really lovely. You paint such a brilliant picture. Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance!